Loops Poem by Seamus O' Brian

Loops

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The thread of this day has unwound
Un-spooled loops lay at my feet,
And looking at the tangled lengths
I am left to contemplate that this
Is what I have purchased with
Hours from my life; these tangled
Loops have cost me a day of living.
No refunds.
No returns. No exchanges.
All sales final.
So I gather them up, frustrating and beautiful
In their imperfection, for they are mine,
And I carry them hopefully into
Tomorrow.

Wednesday, December 21, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life,time
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Annette Aitken 21 December 2016

I can feel the layers peel off as at the end of the day when time to relax, until its time to gather ourself together again and do it all over again, and life goes on. Annette

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Anil Kumar Panda 21 December 2016

This is really beautiful. Time gone does not return. Clever use of metaphors while spilling your feelings. Loved it.

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