Loosing You Poem by marla hayda

Loosing You

Rating: 5.0


Sitting here alone, thinking through.
Trying to convince myself that im not losing you.
Why cant you just forget the things Ive said?
i was angry at that time but now i cleared my head.
It was so strong were did it all go wrong?
So tell me why! Im swimming against the tide.
And im praying for a live line because i am losing you.
Im complicadet i know.
Are you giving up this fight?
I cant stand. Wont stand losing you.
We need more time.
And i know i may have made many mistakes.
But losing you is too much for me to take.
What can i do to dont loose you?
Last thing you should know is that i really love you.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
i lied to a very good friend and he said that he will delet me from his life. This are my feelings through it.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Seale 01 September 2012

Maria, you must tell him this... these exact words...lest he slips into the sea... And then, only a memory... Great write! ; -) -Kelly

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