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loosing you

Sitting here alone, thinking through.
Trying to convince myself that im not losing you.
Why cant you just forget the things Ive said?
i was angry at that time but now i cleared my head.
It was so strong were did it all go wrong?
So tell me why! Im swimming against the tide.
And im praying for a live line because i am losing you.
Im complicadet i know.
Are you giving up this fight?
I cant stand. Wont stand losing you.
We need more time.
And i know i may have made many mistakes.
But losing you is too much for me to take.
What can i do to dont loose you?
Last thing you should know is that i really love you.

Submitted: Saturday, September 01, 2012
Edited: Saturday, September 01, 2012


Poet's Notes about The Poem

i lied to a very good friend and he said that he will delet me from his life. This are my feelings through it.

Comments about this poem (loosing you by marla hayda )

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  • Kelly Seale (9/1/2012 5:44:00 PM)

    Maria, you must tell him this... these exact words...lest he slips into the sea...
    And then, only a memory... Great write! ; -)
    -Kelly

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