Lost Poem by Marina Sofiah

Lost



Love comes
Passionate like fire
But your silence
Cuts like ice

Do not come near
For I wish to forget
The way your eyes
Used to stare into mine

Your words are lies
Like salt on my wound
The sharpest of blades
Would be welcomed relief

Running into nothingness
I bump into memories
Long buried deep
In the recesses of my mind

And my sleeves are wet
Memories are so dusty
They sting and tease
My eyes till tears fall

Lost
Sunday, July 12, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: farewell,goodbye,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chuy Amante 07 September 2017

special love ending as it always will ouch nice write

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Kwai Chee Low 14 July 2015

Lovely piece; perhaps the last line may sound better as My eyes till tears fall. Thanks for sharing, Marina.

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Marina Sofiah 15 July 2015

Thanks for the input Kwai Chee. It does make it sound more sad.

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Marina Sofiah 15 July 2015

Thanks for your feedback Kwai Chee. It does make it sound more sad.

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