Kranthi Pothineni


Lost Dream


Its a beautiful dream
Like a crimson sun
On a milky blue sky
Birds flying to home
And myself in Rome

Its a beautiful dream
Like silver cloud line
To mounted dark cloud
Light kissing the head
And myself on rose bed

Its a beautiful dream
Like shining dew drop
On a lush green grass
Bright day smiling
And myself flying

Its a beautiful dream
Like a new born cub
In hands of young love
Tears flowing in joy
And myself with toys

Its a beautiful dream
Like a painless sleep
On a dry soft pillow
Night not slept slow
And myself out of flow

Its a beautiful dream
Like full moon night
On a artful dark sky
Dogs stopped scream
And myself out of dream

Submitted: Monday, August 24, 2009

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  • Rookie - 135 Points Antonio Liao (8/27/2009 8:44:00 PM)

    a poem that reveals the wonder of creation.....a once....a time we live in
    a place called paradise, Yes! a wonderful land where each soul rejoice.
    until God send us to this beautiful world to live....descriptive language can't
    fathom the fantastic scenery of the eternal place of God.... as the life
    move on, waiting to come home again, when death passes our mortal body
    to lay in the grave it stay....next moment we are wake the lost dream will
    then wiggle us to live..... perfect concept for our faith. God bless...
    a 10 +++++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 254 Points Louis Rams (8/26/2009 7:57:00 PM)

    instead of lost dream, it should have been called 'beautiful dream'.
    because it is beautiful another ten (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 254 Points Shashendra Amalshan (8/25/2009 11:21:00 AM)

    I am very sure and sincerely wish with all my heart that your dreams will come in to reality.
    Every one dreams, and we always get feeling that. oh gosh I am just dreaming, it is never gona come true... but if you work towards them, you might be able to turn those dreams to real.. this is very good writing, nice composition...10

    best wishes and warm regards
    shan (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 254 Points surya . (8/25/2009 7:35:00 AM)

    a very nice poem, beautiful in composition.nice flow and finish too.thanx for sharing.
    voted10
    surya (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 155 Points Marieta Maglas (8/25/2009 4:14:00 AM)

    The similes that are used for the descriptions of the lost dream are wonderful, the rhymes are very well chosen and the message of the poem is very well revealed....10++++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 155 Points Catrina Heart (8/24/2009 11:54:00 PM)

    Now you have penned a sweet flowing words and very nice to read aloud...............loved it! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 155 Points Ted M (8/24/2009 11:53:00 PM)

    You captured the dreams in quite a pleasant flow of Poetry. Nice to read....... (Report) Reply

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