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Closed Path

Path of my voyage
Closed in front of eyes
By waving a farewell
To all my provisions
I had wished for life

In cover of its obscurity
I cried on limited power
Inside my silent shelter
Which time laid for me
To discover my new lay

Then I had found
There lays no end
For a true heart
That beats in love
Even when it breaks

So my old words died
On tip of my tongue
And new melodies came
From deep inside heart
I sang my new lays

When my old tracks
Had gone with wind
New land had opened
For me to wonder
In its hidden rich beauty

Submitted: Friday, June 19, 2009


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  • Walterrean Salley (1/3/2010 2:55:00 PM)

    A poem of hope. There is always hope, so never give up.

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  • Walterrean Salley (1/3/2010 2:54:00 PM)

    A poem of hope. There is always hope, so never give up.

  • Ted M (7/2/2009 1:19:00 PM)

    You have described Life well in a few sentences. Things change; You never how things can change, change for the better only if look for it. Well published.

  • Samanyan Lakshminarayanan (6/26/2009 11:56:00 PM)

    a very good attitude in this poem...go forth for the beauty

  • Shashendra Amalshan (6/22/2009 3:20:00 PM)

    hello friend! ! !

    '
    When my old tracks
    Had gone with wind
    New land had opened
    For me to wonder
    In its hidden rich beauty '

    so glad to hear you talking like this friend! ! ! ! ! .....nice poem indeed! ! ! ! ...
    i wish i can think like this..i m all negative and pessimistic! ! 10++
    well deserved..

    with love
    shan

  • Naseer Ahmed Nasir (6/22/2009 3:16:00 AM)

    Closed paths are apparent though in static situations of life
    with one finding him or herself directionless. Yet the trance
    is what that can make the otherwise aimless life of a human
    being to glow if one follows the circle of pragmatism.

    Best Wishes
    Naseer

  • surya . (6/22/2009 12:52:00 AM)

    very good decesion.knock the door, it will open. nice poem.keep it up port. voted10
    surya

  • Louis Rams (6/21/2009 8:06:00 PM)

    doors open when we're down and out, thats what love is all about.

  • Dr Hitesh Sheth (6/21/2009 11:52:00 AM)

    When one path is close other path is opened......a good write.......

  • Eyan Desir (6/20/2009 8:38:00 PM)

    Complex
    good flow
    Well crafted
    Kranthi

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