Lost Lady Poem by David Brown Jr

Lost Lady

Rating: 5.0


I do stuff that make you mad or make you cry
But it got real when i saw tears come out of my eyes
Never knew it was you that brought me joy
Like a kid with a new toy
Like a man who got his first promotion
Like a fish with no sharks in the ocean
Like a little that loves to sing now leading Sunday devotion
Like a turtle moving fast instead of in slow motion
Like a sun that can shine all day without no rain
Like a butterfly flying free with you i feel no pain
This is how i fell when i have you are near
Now it feels like you have disappeared

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Elena Toledo 02 December 2012

It's very nice David, you have some few mistakes in some words. But I like it very much? This is how i fell when i have you are near instead it should be This is how I FEEL when I have you near.

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