Lost Souls Unite Poem by Justin Greene

Lost Souls Unite

Rating: 5.0


How can we find our way, when we can't even see what is in front of us
We believe that our love can defeat any demons we face
Heaven is so far away and hell is closing in
Without you at my side I don't think I can make it
The love we share shines so bright that it will guide us threw this darkness
We are two souls so I care not if we are lost forever

Something higher then you and I has push us forward
Nothing can break this bond we share
The power our love creates is sharper then any blade
As time goes on we realize who we truly are
Two becomes one this day
Love has always show us the way

The passion we share will last forever
Our souls transcends time itself
When we look at each other all is at peace
Roses do this love shame
Is this magic or just a dream
Two stars shine this night

We are never in the dark
Light shines on us, always
The gods above try to steel you, but you don't go
Goddesses grasp at me, but I break free
No one can stand between us
No matter where we are, our souls are always united.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Catrina Heart 04 March 2009

interesting craft written in heart touching verses...you are two souls united and doesn't care if you are lost forever....But, you have faith that your love can defeat demons? ? ? ...then, i could say that your love is heavenly and won't be lost......forever...10+++++

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Justin Greene 27 September 2010

thanks for all of your comments

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Justin Greene 07 September 2009

thank you ^_^ ^_^ ^_^

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Sarwar Chowdhury 06 September 2009

Fine diction! touchy verses! Ammmmmazing poem! 10+

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Marieta Maglas 02 September 2009

''Roses do this love shame Is this magic or just a dream Two stars shine this night'' excellent lyric poem, I believe you...............10

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Justin Greene 01 September 2009

I have just edited it, and added on to it ^_^ hope you enjoy ^_^

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