Vain Raven Poem by Justin Greene

Vain Raven

Rating: 5.0


Justice is forgotten with the rise of darkness.
There screams mean nothing.
Humanity falls before me.
My heart beats no more, with my life endless
They took everything
Life passes by as a dark world I see.


I try to make them understand the pain.
being forgotten is the thing I fear.
I spill there guts and drink the sweet blood.
Over the years I have gone insane.
Death is no longer my cure.
My name has been reduced to mud.

I have rose once more in the the dead of night.
Killing is my passion.
Thou mind is caved in.
All of you humans will fear my might.
My sword is a fearsome lion.
For my name is Vain Raven.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Obinna Eruchie 14 September 2009

Don't worry, you will get better. Justin, you have what it takes to be inspired and keep improving. The piece is readable.

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Justin Greene 01 September 2009

not my best but try to enjoy ^_^

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