Lots Of Energy Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
Lots Of Energy
Lots of energy
Monday,10th September 2018
Not the criticism alone
but the addition of one more
point to add more fragrance
and to show presence at once
Mere like or dislike
won't strike
the reader's attention
it will have no added value for the retention
We are accustomed to receiving good applause
and chose
same readers who fall in line
and favorably define the creation
I shall state differently
there has to be an addition of something substantially
highlighting where some colors can be added
and beautifully strengthened
it takes lots of energy
to add substance to the poetry
use the best part of the thoughts
and in such way that they seem to have not taught
but care has to be taken
apparently it should not look as if faith is shaken
by reading the poem
and warranted adverse comments on them
Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta
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