Love Poem by anon ymous

Love



I once thought I loved a girl,
Her lips were perfect, like a pearl

Her eyes were hazel and bright,
And I wished that mine, had the same light.

Her hair was chestnut, straight and long!
And I thought, it was worth a song

But alas, no-one agreed with me,
So she ended up, leaving the county.

I have not been writing poems for very long, so I am asking for some constructive criticism

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