With love in the air all around,
Cupid's floral arrows hound,
My love at first sight I found,
Now my feet are not on ground.
Magic fragrance girdled round,
In spring time my love I found,
With its chord I am now bound,
I am deep delved in love profound.
Silently, it has captured my being,
I don't want to loosen its string,
Like love birds to its tune I sing
My heart as dancing peacock fling,
I have now only one shore,
All the time my love adore,
All my heart on love I pour,
Parting love can bear no more.
My love is now my honey comb,
Lotus ever in my being bloom,
Now there is no place for gloom,
I am in bliss in love's red room.
Without love our world would die, lets hope it stays breathes new life into an ever waiting world.
nice lines well crafted words good poetic sense sir i am not good enough to critique your writing skills, like you i am an ardent devotee of dattareya
wow..this is a nice and a well penned write. From the top to the bottom..and i just adore and love it. wonderful... Hugs, meggie
How very beautiul to see someone in love. A word, so very loaded, so very deep, an ocean that never dries, a wonder that never ends. Greetings for trying to capture this essence divine, I hope and wish it to become contagious one day. Well done! Regards
this is unique one about love sir.. you know many poets have tried to express their feelings or attitude to love, a great poet always try to do something innovative or express himself in a different way, this is nice write sir! ! 10++= with love shan
Flowing beautiful love poem all leading down to the last stanza of delightful words such as honey comb, lotus and love's red room. 10 Karin Anderson
Such beauty of words dressed your lovely poem. Great end rhymes written...........10
May your love last forever and ever. Very sweet and lighthearted full of promise and hope for the future. '10! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
that was a very nice poem about your love for her...