Love And Hate On Walls. Poem by Chris Felch

Love And Hate On Walls.



Love does come from the Heart, yet the brain can steer you wrong! This is nothing you can seek in a song, just teach them all to sing along. Love does indeed drive hate, Yet is not hard to find a soul mate. Love without hate is nothing at all, yet you can find these words written on walls. Its sad yet true, stick together like birds of a feather. This is not dedicated to no one specific, yet you can find it across the Pacific. Oceans are deep valleys are wide, Always listen to your heart and speak from the mind. Love does indeed take time, then again its priceless and cant even be bought for a dime. I could go on and on yet these are only words. Stay strong and positive thru it all. One day it will be written on another wall...

-Chris-

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Maya (ayam) Armstrong 06 June 2010

Can you say 'Breath Taking'? This is b-e-a-utiful, Chris. I hope to read more of you poems. But a little word of advice- You might wanna write in stanzas, other than that, the flow is wonderful, the way you used Alliteration was amazing, and your rhythm is steady. Awesome job! yam

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Chris Felch

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