Love Does The Most Craziest Things Poem by kiara o'connell

Love Does The Most Craziest Things

Rating: 4.0


love does the most craziest things
somedays your so happy and all u wanna do is sing,
but on the other hand love is like a bee and it leaves a sting.
somedays you get jealous and feel sad and blue,
but on the other hand they are not with them they are with you.
somedays you just wanna laugh but then cry even though everythings fine.
because you are so happy to have them in your life but then so scared to loose them at the same time.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 04 September 2008

This is a poem with rhymes. Though one, I don't much care for. It is written with enthusiasm. I can just see her writing this as fast as she can. It is not a bad poem, so I gave it an 8 and a recommendation. But honestly, it could be done better. I think this poem will be visited again once or twice. GW62

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