hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 66,573 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Love Has Power - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

Love has power

You were seen
Over sky scene
I felt moved
So I shouted "love, love"

I was thrilled
And excelled
As moving birds were seen
In formation with wings open

No one felt weak
I had no words to speak
I felt strength in body
The spirit was filled by an almighty

I realize
And sensationalize
The might of love
That I really believed

Love has power
To mushroom with shower
It has power to bring up cheers
With emergence of beautiful flowers

Rainbow shall reflect
With all colors to act
And show the natural asset
That is open for all to state


Comments about Love Has Power by hasmukh amathalal

  • Gold Star - 66,573 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/2/2014 10:36:00 PM)

    Indeed Love has POWER and how. Wonderful write, thank you for sharing
    27 minutes ago by Sylvia Frances Chan | Reply (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 66,573 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/2/2014 10:35:00 PM)

    Natural Love


    Prithvi Raj Datta26 minutes ago
    Great gathering of loving words
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  • Gold Star - 66,573 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/2/2014 10:35:00 PM)

    NICE! More practice


    She'Rae Polland26 minutes ago
    I like the point of it, and the theme, but I think you should work on your English a little bit more. I do appreciate your artistry. Peace.
    Comment 1 Comment0

    Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago
    my poetry and english is appreciated world over dear.. total 7500 poems (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 66,573 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/1/2014 2:44:00 AM)

    Love has power

    You were seen
    Over sky scene
    I felt moved (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, August 1, 2014

Poem Edited: Friday, August 1, 2014


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