Love, Heart, Soulmate Poem by ruby heart

Love, Heart, Soulmate

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what is true love?
we don't know for sure
but what we know is
love makes us feel
the desire, the need, the affection

when our eyes lock,
we feel the twinkle
in our eyes
the tinkle in our stomach
our heart beat racing
fireworks going off
in the night sky
how can love make
us feel that way?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ruby Heart 29 January 2009

hello! people. is this poem reallly bad?

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The Dreamer 30 May 2009

It make you feel this way because all the colours of you life kiss your hear and your sour releases the rainbow – thank you Ruby very nice

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Emily Oldham 17 May 2009

nice poem.......... asks questions hard to answer, but you answered them for me! :) thanks keep writing Athena *** words will change the world ***

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 12 May 2009

True love is eternal, it is not wanting not possessing, , , , , , , , , , , , good poem ruby

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Greenwolfe 1962 30 January 2009

We may well respond. What other way could it make us feel? The spark of love is well described by the writer. Apparently in love or has been. A poem with knowledge attached. Better than one without. GW62

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Linda Winchell 30 January 2009

Nothing that is heart felt is bad, just different than someone else might think.8 on this one. Keep writing. God Bless, Linda

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