Treasure Island

Mrbrian Sixtynine


Love's harsh truth


Look I haven't got the arss on
It's just I see your hearts gone
From the path that I walk on
So I shall just have to march on
Without your mark and heart warm

So I'm sad, your path leads
To a different man you see
As it makes my heart bleed
To see you in another's company

But if it's what you want
Then I'll be the one to respond
With a kiss to say goodbye
To the girl I wish was mine.

Submitted: Tuesday, August 26, 2014
Edited: Tuesday, August 26, 2014

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  • Roseann Shawiak (8/26/2014 4:49:00 PM)

    You have approached this harsh reality with compassion
    quieting your own desire out of love. Beautiful interpretation! !
    Great poem. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

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