Love Sonnet 135: 'Our Love Has Thrived Above Board All The Time' Poem by Reyvrex Questor Reyes

Love Sonnet 135: 'Our Love Has Thrived Above Board All The Time'

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Our love has thrived above board all the time,
That scribes above would note regards our fate,
Perhaps, we have enough of deeds sublime,
For sure access enjoyed at Heaven's gate;
No need to press review of glorious acts,
Or pester Heaven's keeper with demands,
You have been virtuous, on angelic tracts,
On paths not swerved, and far from reprimands;
Yet should our mirth confront but bolted doors,
We'll wait outside, encamped in desert tents
As would bedouin sheiks and troubadours,
Until all settles to our hearts intents;
.......But even now, with you here by my side,
.......To call it less than Heaven, I deride.

Monday, August 31, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: angel,god,heaven,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bhargabi Dei Mahakul 31 August 2015

In love becoming virtuous and angelic is amazingly wise as this composition specifies. Wise sharing.

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Reyvrex 09 August 2022

Thanks Bhargavi Dei Mahakul

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Reyvrex Questor Reyes 31 August 2015

This poem is an offshoot from reading about Heavenly rhymes from children's storybooks.

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Reyvrex Questor Reyes 29 April 2016

Thank you Edward Kofi Louis.

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Edward Kofi Louis 29 April 2016

On paths not swerved! Nice piece of work.

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Reyvrex Questor Reyes 21 October 2015

Thanks to Saheb Mohapatra, and to all who have commented.

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Saheb Mohapatra 21 October 2015

top class composition..........you have perfectly excavated your knowledge about love and sprinkled it on your incredible work....thank you.

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 01 September 2015

Truly, true love has the grace of an angel

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