Love, your heart is mine,
kneading it I'll refine
the threads of your design.
I must remove its roughness
increasing its smoothness,
I shall enhance its grace.
kindness and softness engraved in mind enriched with love removes roughness of heart - I love it
The idea of kneading a heart, removing its roughness, increasing its smoothness and finally enhancing its grace, seems to me a motherly job for a son or a daughter. Liked this lovely poem.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Truly said - love is the smoother that removes the roughness thanks Max rating for the content :