Stupid I Poem by Neela Nath Das

Stupid I

Rating: 4.8


My stupid I,
do not know,
the sight of the
falling snow.
My stupid I,
didn't see,
the depth of,
unexplored sea.
My stupid I,
never watch,
how the honey-bees,
do flowers touch!
My stupid I,
do always kill,
the busy ants,
doing their drill.
My stupid I,
can never stand,
to enjoy the sky,
and beautiful land.
Now, my stupid I,
want to feel all,
she missed before,
Oh! Nature's call!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Asif Andalib 28 November 2012

God has created the nature so beautifully it amazes us if we observe it. The sky, the landscape, the rivers and seas, the animal kingdom everything is so perfect and awe-inspiring. But unfortunately sometimes we have no time to take a good look at it and appreciate its beauty. I enjoyed reading your beautiful write

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Lyn Paul 30 November 2012

Amazing poem, beautifully written

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Indranil Bhaduri 30 November 2012

Amazing! One of the best poems I have ever read.

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Hazel Durham 30 November 2012

Straight to the point, so true we should stand and watch, learn, admire nature's abundance! Great write!

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Unnikrishnan E S 24 January 2021

The great lover of nature in the poet expresses herself forcefully in this lovely poem.5🌟

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 12 October 2017

Please don't ever tell lies to us, oh great lover of nature, you do not succeed here in proving that you can be that Idiot..in practice you see in a moment, much ahead and around than the present day idiots would ever, in their entire life. Thanks for the lovely tiny breed, a marvel of the art of poetry from you Sir. Missing you in this PH brotherhood over the months. Regards, Subhas

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Bri Edwards 07 July 2017

hey! Stupid U! perhaps you were busy with OTHER things? ? tell us about Smart Me. i'm sure there must be SOMETHING to tell there. One reason i enjoy sights of Nature is probably because one often does not have to go far OR spend money (or much money) to find and view a spider's web, a wispy cloud, a swallow swooping, or a flower budding. to MyPoemList. bri :) i read a comment you wrote somewhere else on PH.

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Neela Nath Das 12 July 2017

Thanks Bri.Yes, I'm busy but I'm writing poetry and short stories in my native language and learning French at the same time.Moreover, I am a service holder.Besides these I take care of my family like other Indians.

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Mountain Man 30 August 2016

A very good poem.....

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Dr Antony Theodore 09 January 2016

Nature's call! want to feel all, the sky, busy ants how the honey-bees, do flowers touch! t he depth of, unexplored sea. falling snow very good thoughts written well. thank u very much tony

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