Lovedmeso? Poem by CrushedHopes

Lovedmeso?



I actually thought
we were meant to be.
when happiness we
showed for all to see.

At that time we both just seemed
so lovey dovey,
for the door to our long lasting love,
i thought
we had the key.

Who said shooting stars will
make my wishes come true?
Cos ur unforgiving and
awful heart, i saw through.

I'm not gonna fall into
your love trap anymore,
cos you broke
my belief in forevermore.

What more is there
left for me.
when our love is
just a shell emptied.

Where did all your
love for me go?
Wait, from the start,
did u even loved me so?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Emily Oldham 10 May 2009

nice write. great mixture of passion, love, longing and mystery. keep writing, thanks Athena *** words will change the world ***

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Kelvin Karani 03 April 2009

Sometime back, when I was told that love is a decision not an emotion. The persona here however, like most of us, is deluded to think its an emotion. nice write

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