Lovely And Fine Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Lovely And Fine

Rating: 5.0


You it is lovely and fine
Everything looks divine
Moon shines from far
You seem to be shining star

Yes it is special
It makes scene beautiful
With your arrival
To dance with soul

I wish I could be
At very much delight and free
To touch the untouched lips
And hear the silent beeps

Should I take you?
To make you feel through
It is yet the night
Let us make it delightful and right

It is open room
With lovely blossom
You are near with all smiles
I fear no more with your style

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 February 2014

Like 19 Feb by Miki Anon to Lovely and fine

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 February 2014

You it is lovely and fine Everything looks divine

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 February 2014

Lovely! Jazmin Almeida7 minutes ago The rhymes you used make this one fun to read but some seemed a little forced. Overall, I liked it! It's mysterious to me, which I find appealing in a poem. Keep writing! Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 February 2014

lovely chris Cowan10 minutes ago You are near

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 February 2014

Comment +1 . John Cantwell10 minutes ago . nice one

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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