hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 33,972 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Lovely Future - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

No one tries to fall
But it responds to call
Beautiful invite
For passion to ignite

The light path follows
And it certainly allows
To be felt at each other
One responds with smile either

The age does miracle
The invitation goes through smile
The easy and effective one
So far not shard by any one

Love is divine gift
Be firm and make no shift
Love her till end
Comfort her always as friend

Let her see you as beam
And work as team
Take her to safety
As graced by almighty

Let garden add new flower
With fragrance smell her
Make her feel at home
Always open arms to welcome

Nature may support
But some times may fall short
You make it worth and assure
She must find lovely future


Comments about Lovely Future by hasmukh amathalal

  • Gold Star - 33,972 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/10/2014 8:18:00 AM)

    Beautiful iNVITE passion to IGNITE, , FANTASTIC, WORDS, Hasmukh, NICE, VERY INVOLVING, , ! ! ! I


    Jawahar Gupta36 minutes ago
    I LOVE YOUR WHOLE POEM.! ! (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 33,972 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/10/2014 7:26:00 AM)

    Love it


    Misty Lawrence11 minutes ago
    Your poems are in a similar rhyme scheme as mine, Nice to read.
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  • Gold Star - 33,972 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/10/2014 7:26:00 AM)

    Good One


    Tuvako Mbeche10 minutes ago
    Like this (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 33,972 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/10/2014 7:03:00 AM)

    No one tries to fall
    But it responds to call (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, April 10, 2014

Poem Edited: Thursday, April 10, 2014


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