Loving Words! ! Poem by Becky Ginn

Loving Words! !

Rating: 5.0


Everything seems empty,
Since you left me here,
Happiness is never a feeling,
And now the darkness draws near.

I wish I could just forget you,
But somehow its so hard,
Does this mean I'm in love with you?
Cos loving has left me scarred.

How could you hurt me?
With those loving words so kind,
But they could never be the truth,
Whats really going through your mind?

My head is full of questions,
Is this how its meant to be?
Once in the past, it was us
But now its only me.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mary Nagy 23 April 2006

The loss of love is a pain that's been felt by many. You've expressed it well here. I'm glad to see you are still writing and improving. You have lots of talent for such a young girl....you should be proud of yourself! Take care Becky. Sincerely, Mary

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