Loving You Poem by Rebecca Pepper

Loving You



Don't fall in love you would always say
But I still can't see a better way
For the little things you did for me
They made my heart and soul feel free

But still you would say in no uncertain way
That if I fall in love I would live to pay
A price that would leave me raw and torn
Because of a misery of which so many mourn

What I didn't understand that fateful day
Was that it wasn't for me that I should dismay
Nor for my life that love would take
But still a loss that would leave me broken in its wake

But still I found love on a rainy day in May
A love with which fate would later play
Her eyes would shine with hope and pain
And she would hold me close, begging to remain sane

Still you say from the sterile bed in which you lay
I shouldn't have fell in love with you that day
For now I am to be left alone once you pass
Because of this illness no-one could surpass

But now I tell you to rest because it's okay
For loving you I would gladly pay
A price of pain and loneliness when you leave
Because you were the only one in which I ever believed

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Sort of inspired by Terrible Things by Mayday Parade, that song always reminds me why I dont look to far into lyrics... always makes me cry but I suppose thats because I'm pretty much a emotional freak most of the time :) Anyway hope you enjoy the poem. Should probably try writing some more happy poems soon. It always seems to be so angsty -_-
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Niamat Ali Murtazai 25 October 2012

The poem is ravishingly simple and pretty.The theme and rhyme make us feel poetic spirit imbued in it so naturally.

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