Loving You Poem by Rage Allay

Loving You

Rating: 4.2


You are like a fleeting echo that rings through my soul.
You are like the clouds, so visible
Yet impossible to hold and own.
You are like the air that I cannot live without.
You occupy my mind, my feelings,
My heart and my soul.
You are the source of my happiness;
You are the reason for my being.
But if you choose a life without me
Let me not deter you
For I will always love you
Even if it has to be from a distance.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Victor Sklyarov 09 February 2009

Very beautiful poem. And very individual. You should submit it to competitions. It has all chances to win any.

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Miriam Maia Padua 31 January 2009

wow....beautiful, sweet flowing words.... wonderful message of great love words from a heart who love yet willing to set her free... really touching.... ...i love this piece..it gives my heart a pinch.... 10+++++and goes to my fave

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 31 January 2009

So loving a mesage, flowing so well...10

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Catrina Heart 31 January 2009

tough love so heartfelt and sincere....words flow so naturally in a free verse form.10/10

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