Its a clear lull now I feel,
even when I walk the mysteries of this beauty in all!
nothing else excites me in my feel,
nor nothing more brings me of any change of heal!
no whispers even I do hear,
but just the sound of my heart tear!
it is not so loud for my ears,
as my heart perched on 'a beauty' as much as she fears!
more this silence as it goes on and on,
wonder if it all, I can ever sustain!
but still it is a sweet lull I landed in,
seems I don't have to care for anything else but being in!
copyright © Siddartha Montik (Ramesh Kompella)
The poem is a spiritual one with submission and humbleness. I love such poems. The poet has put his deep thoughts in his work. It is a well constructed, academic poem. ]]]].....it is not so loud for my ears, as my heart perched on 'a beauty' as much as she fears! ....., [[[[ We hardly hear such voices of sages as the poet brought up. Keep the good spirit up, poet! The highest rating for this masterpiece. Thanks for sharing.
no whispers even I do hear, but just the sound of my heart tear! Very touching, full marks Aniruddha Pathak
This pleasant lull, I am sure is the result of being in love with somebody or something! A lovely write radiating sweet contentment
but still it is a sweet lull I landed in, seems I don't have to care for anything else but being in! - - - - - - - - A lovely write- - - - brings a feeling of calmness.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
‘seems I don't have to care nothing else but being in! ’ …touching finishing rope…yeah stay stoic [you feel ‘sweet’ …here is your poetic mastery] apathetic are but ways of expression of inner suffering… Greater you interiorize better the poetic vision will be…clear...not turbid …lulled but not dulled you’re….lolol Thanks for sharing 10/10. Ms. Nivedita UK