My first poem, Im looking for inspiration, I could use some help or criticism, not spell checked, I just wrote it like 5 minutes ago: D I hope its worth something
I dont want to be a machine,
Water does me good,
I do not want oil to lubricate my joints.
I enjoy having blood,
I do not want clockwork,
unprediciccality is fine.
I do not want perfectly wired circuitry,
My veins are fine.
following patterns is fine,
But dont make it my life.
You should stop turning people off during nine to five.
I want to walk the sidewalks,
not fight metal beasts in the street.
Id love to see people,
but alls I see is twisted machinery.
Where did you take their hearts?
Far far away it seems,
because all that is left is the mind.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
An excellent poem.....