Machines Poem by Salman Sayeed

Machines

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What can be as strong as this
What can be as powerful as this
Huge monster using its skill
Moving its iron muscles at our will
Sweating out oils as it toils
The magic of labour cannot be spoiled
Long and shining arms of metal rods
Moving boulders yet so gentle
The sure fingered rods that never miss
Watching it work is bliss
Slave of man with no other need
Without any fatigue working as per our wish
It lives to earn its masters bread
For its maker profits it adds
What can be as obediant as this
What can be as loyal as this

Wednesday, March 23, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: machismo
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem is expressed vary romantically
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajnish Manga 25 March 2016

Nicely articulated poem about the strength and versatility of man-made monstrous machines. Graphic description. Thank you, Salman. I quote a few lines: Without any fatigue working as per our wish It lives to earn its masters bread

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Hey good efforts. Try.

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