Moon Poem by Salman Sayeed

Moon

Rating: 4.9


Against a starry night,
The moon looks so beautiful and white.
It gives us light in the night.

The beautiful moonstruck in sky,
I look at it from my window,
And wish I could touch the moon

I wonder why the moon shines only at night,
Giving us its beautiful sight.
I wish I could touch the moon

The moon so beautiful and white,
Giving us this beautiful sight
In the clear, starry night.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Uzefa Rashida M.a 05 March 2016

This is your best poem Salman.

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Salman Sayeed 14 March 2016

Thank you so much mam. For commenting my poems

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Uzefa Rashida M.a 05 March 2016

Lovely poem. Your imagination and love for nature is simply beautiful Keep it up salman. Read poems and write poems. You will be a great poet one fine day In Shaa Allah.

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Aarifa Almas 19 April 2016

Great write.. Enjoyed it.. Keep sharing..

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M Asim Nehal 18 April 2016

The dream of moon is elusive and fascinating too Please read my poem Death of a moon it has 4 poems in series.10+++ for this lovely poem.

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Md Anisur Rahman 17 April 2016

I like sky, I like moon Where they stay both. I like night I like moon light When they are growth. Thank you.

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Anne Yun 09 April 2016

it's beautiful, the words you chose matched well with the chear starry night, simple is the night, full of serene light.

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Good narration and rhyming

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Salman Sayeed 23 March 2016

Thank you for commenting my poem

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