Magnetic Force Poem by Tia Maria

Magnetic Force

Rating: 5.0


What is that something that drew me to you
The same something that I am feeling too
How could I ask you to explain this thing
When I know longer understand anything
Like two magnets in outer space
Orbiting into a common place
I feel your presence
I feel you so near
Our two hearts
are about to
collide
right
about
here

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
The Dreamer 08 June 2009

Magnets are like hearts when two opposites attract Pulling each other in many ways that are hard to explain Yet happy to feel the force and energy a heart can give It’s a magnetic force that you send That makes me feel like I live Thank You

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Fay Slimm 06 December 2008

I love the clever presentation Tia - it draws the reader down into the piece and is a very novel way of metre and line...... a great verse.......from Fay.

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Kris Smith 29 November 2008

Nice warm wtite Tia 10 Chris

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 29 November 2008

The sweet power of love, Tia... Andy 10

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