Majestic Morning Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Majestic Morning

Rating: 5.0


Rising sun with new rays say
Come on and fly dear birds
I shall show you path to sky
Newly you will fill life light.

I am the truth of majestic dawn
Everyday I do duty for purity
I rise to gift you morning
Breaking past night I come near.

You creatures awake for creator
God has given command to time
This has started blowing wind
Beauty of life you feel soon dear.

Majestic morning is gorgeous
Poets get up and write new poems
Adoring god we all sing glory
I am the rising sun you see here.

Saturday, November 21, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: morning,nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ratnakar Mandlik 21 November 2015

The beautiful poem in the form of a soliloquy of the Sun god is refreshing to mind of human, in a way it is a prayer praising the bountiful Creator. Enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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M Asim Nehal 22 November 2015

Morning is the best time to receive the fresh and new ideas, very well said, sir.

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Michael Walker 22 November 2015

As I write this, It is a 'majestic, gorgeous morning outside'. This morning is a time of hope, time to thank God for the day which He has created. M. Walker.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 21 November 2022

A majestic poem dear poet. Loved the humble poetic expression. Top score and to my favourites.

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Edward Kofi Louis 10 August 2018

Echoes of a new day! ! With the romance of nature. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Alex Sarich 26 November 2015

I enjoyed your poem.

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Alex Sarich 26 November 2015

well said. I enjoyed the poem.

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Chuy Amante 22 November 2015

you are indeed the rising sun namaste

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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