Treasure Island

Lilac Wine


Make Me Die a Thousand Deaths


When you whisper sweet pearls of love violins play serenades in my soul
When you say my name endless days of dreams become eternal nights of reality
When you touch my skin fireworks come ablaze in the velveteen skies
When you kiss my lips you turn my body into a sinfully delightful liquid fire
When you tell me you love me hosts of angels adorn the heaven in our eyes
When you hold me in your arms you drown me in oceans of sweet sensual desire
When you make love to me I die a thousand deaths and then
You bring me back to life…Make me die a thousand deaths
Bring me back to life

Submitted: Wednesday, June 06, 2007
Edited: Friday, May 25, 2012

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  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (6/20/2007 11:41:00 PM)

    They can make you die a million deaths, but they will never put this Poem to rest.
    I Like the tone & the effulgent imagework...Much pomp & verve, here...and it makes for a grand pictorial of a Poem, young lady....You Do Rock!

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  • Andrew mark Wilkinson (6/8/2007 4:31:00 PM)

    My... What passion in words that are writen here.. Lilac.. Let me die a thousand deaths, but love but once, with all my heart... Writen so beautifully Lilac this poem is fantastic...10 (Report) Reply

  • Jack Tex (6/7/2007)

    Oh, my goodness, look what the wind blew in. Another lovely poem with lovely 'serenades'. I like it a lot and you certainly have my double thumbs up from here...great write. The first line rocks, violins, know what I mean?

    May God make you live a thousand lives
    Fondest Regards
    Mohammad
    XxxxxXXXXxxx (Report) Reply

  • Marci Made (6/6/2007 7:31:00 PM)

    Take Your Breath Away Beautiful! ! ! ! An emotional poem willed with the emotions of one whom feels loved...Amazing! ! ! ! marci.xo (Report) Reply

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