Make Sure Here Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Make Sure Here

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Make sure
Friday,6th March 2020

"I will ban you for one month"
that shall prove death knell
you shall not be able to post
you will pay heavy cost

one of the founder
and chancellor
of the literary group threatened
and hastened to add

"Why should you meddle unnecessarily"?
the freedom right is with everybody
he burst into rage and spoke above words
I said be careful from now onward

"You have made waste paper certificate factory"
that makes everybody sorry
even street vendor is given world literacy award
with your signature and word

such is plight today
everybody wants to be godfather
we can't be led by leader if "herd of sheep"
who tries to keep overall control

the intelligent admins decide everything
shower praises with morning and evening
what is he trying for the literature?
one needs to think and make sure

Hasmukh Mehta

Make Sure Here
Friday, March 6, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: poem
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 15 March 2020

Joseph spnce sr.... Your use of the questioning technique in awesome and draws the reader into the lines for a greater understanding of the theme. Great job! Have an awesome day, don’t forget to pray, stay encouraged, inspired, ingenious, resilient, and blessed always!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 15 March 2020

Joseph Spence Sr. When I read to first words I started laughing. It sounds like Facebook, banning someone for posting too much on the site. It also could be one of the sites on Facebook, banning someone for posting too much in one day. I also like the intermittent rhyming sequence in the poem. The descriptive excellence is great and resonate with vivid images.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 15 March 2020

His Excellency, Dr. Amb. Prof. Joseph S. Spence Sr. USA. (Epulaeryu Master) ! William Shakespeare’s Award-Winner, Multi-Genre Award-Winning Poet, Man of God, Global Icon of Humanity and Spiritual Services, Global Chair Advisor-Global Literary Society, Research Scholar, Book Reviewer, Ex Fabula Dynamic Story Teller, Academician and Stellar Article Writer!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 March 2020

who tries to keep overall control the intelligent admins decide everything shower praises with morning and evening what is he trying for the literature? one needs to think and make sure Hasmukh Mehta

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