Man Off The Moon Poem by Douglas Scotney

Douglas Scotney

Douglas Scotney

Toowoomba, Queensland, Australia. Resides in Adelaide

Man Off The Moon

Rating: 5.0


Well-kenned in Scotland
is that pipes on bagpipes are called drones.

With sound cause, 'drone'
is a name for the whole caboodle,
which is appearing in Scottish political cartoons,
hovering in the air,
spying on lewd conduct and illicit behaviour.

At the end of the day its bag is so gross,
it floats, headquarters-bound
barely clear of the ground,
or big-bounces off it like man off the moon,
with each hit, expelling a droneful tune.

Man Off The Moon
Saturday, November 23, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: moon,music,technology,language
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I'm not sure this is happening; but it sure should be.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Michael Walker 08 July 2020

I agree with you about the boring sound of bagpipes. They turn me off.

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Bri Edwards 24 November 2019

" ken: verb Scottish•Northern English know" you would have saved ME time by typing " well-known" ! ! ! ha ha. caboodle: " noun: the whole number or quantity of people or things in question" i don't fine a definition for " gross" which (for me) fits here. but, all in all, i like the poem. it looks like someone used a healthy heart as a target for spears! ! bri :)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 November 2019

At the end of the day its bag is so gross. Drone sounds amazing. Moon is musical for man. Technology has developed a lot. An interesting poem is beautifully penned.10

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Bernard F. Asuncion 24 November 2019

A significant poem....10++++

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Douglas Scotney

Douglas Scotney

Toowoomba, Queensland, Australia. Resides in Adelaide
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