Manifesto To God Poem by Max Reif

Manifesto To God

Rating: 3.5


I want Heaven On Earth
to be my brand name,
I want to be a full distributor.

That's what I want
pouring out of my cup
to everyone I talk to,
everyone I e-mail,
everyone I touch.

That's the only product
I want to handle,
because I see it's so close,

I see it in the green of every palm tree,
in the lovely color of blue
chosen for our sky,
and in the life-giving rain.

I don't read the papers,
let them keep putting out their bad news,
sooner of later people will wise up,

they'll come to where
milk and honey are always flowing,
drink the sweet milk
at the coconut's center
instead of choking
on its hairy husk.

It's not my brand, God, it's yours,
it's not like I'm trying to take credit,
you're the sole bottler and manufacturer,
I only want a franchise,
I just want to move that bliss,
and work for you, Big Guy, forever

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Robert Howard 28 January 2007

Good plan! Let's replace the world of the doable and marketable with the world of the beautiful and miraculous. All in favor, please signify by......

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Dan Tharp 29 April 2006

I think we, as human kind, will wise up later as opposed to sooner. We are a hard headed lot of people! dan

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Philippa Lane 18 April 2006

Max, this is a brilliant poem - it's originality stunning. After reading this poem, it is just as if I had got drunk on mead...and that is heaven too...

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Nibedita Deb 11 April 2006

This poem is a must read for today's people. Reading such poems can bring a miraculous change(Which I yearn for) . Your poem is simply laudable. Thank u - N.D.

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Poetry Hound 07 April 2006

A nice twist on the wake-up-and-smell-the-roses attitude.

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