Me & Me Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

Me & Me

Rating: 5.0


Iam my god
Iam my satan

A 'Krihna' is within me
As well a 'Sakuni'
An 'Arjuna' is within me
As well a 'Duryodhan'
A war within
As well a 'Gita' within

On the outside
my entire existence is wasted through violence
On the inside
violence is the very essence of my existence

How can i save me from myself-
through any outside means.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joseph Poewhit 19 November 2008

Those are strong feelings to hold within

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Salu Salu 25 November 2008

'On the outside my entire existence is wasted thro voilence On the inside voilence is the very essence of my existence'.. well said. allegories pro & con on principle is presented nice. rgrds/salu

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premji premji 25 November 2008

true painting of inner-plight 10+++ please read my poem 'the world'

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Rajaram Ramachandran 27 November 2008

Me & Me tells me that I should be a Krishna and not a Sakuni-Well I wish to remain so at all times. Thanks.

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different but good... Krista

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Patti Masterman 28 September 2009

Wow; so many insights written in the form of a poem. It's so true; only we can save ourselves.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 18 June 2009

'How can i save me from myself- through any outside means.' Marvelous poem, nice idea.

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Moushumi moushumi 01 January 2009

An honest confession with a genuine introspection.

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Kesav Easwaran 31 December 2008

birth and death both are not violence by themselves...in between we create all violences...thanks for your good piece...10

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Surekha Anandaraya Bhat 27 December 2008

Good one; nice thoughts

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