Melancholic Valley Poem by Sandra Feldman

Melancholic Valley

Rating: 4.5


And I,
I don't even know,
Why?
I miss you,
When you didn't even care,
Whether I lived or died,
Just like any passer by,
You ignored me,
No matter how much,
Nor how hard, I'd try,
As if we had never even met,
As if love were more than far,
To even try to get.

Now,
As the clandestine clouds of Destiny,
Carry your soul away from mine, forever,
I will never know, if deep down inside,
I could have reached you,
And made you understand,
How much I really cared,
But no, the evening came,
And we lost the saving light,
In the Melancholic Valley,
Of a love we never shared.

Wednesday, June 1, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Manonton Dalan 01 June 2016

there are voices and emotions that seem to be ignored even though they're very true... lost connections maybe or unforgiving feelings that overcome every effort to connect... life is really wonderful. very nice poem..i like it.

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Pamela Sinicrope 03 June 2016

So sad Sandra. Regret and love is hard to cope with. Human connection is such an important part of being alive. Peace to you.

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Kelly Kurt 02 June 2016

This could unfortunately only be written with experience. You left nothing behind in your heart pouring,

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Mike Smith 01 June 2016

The what ifs and the if onlys can sometimes be just as difficult to cope with as any nightmare or something more sinister yet might be. To fail is to fail. It hurts, but it happens and we grow from it. To succeed is to succeed. We achieve something and are rewarded for our actions. But to not know, to for time unknown wonder what could have been, that is perhaps the most frustrating

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Eugene Levich 01 June 2016

How sad for the gentleman in question that he never enjoyed the love of our lovely poetess.

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Elena Sandu 01 June 2016

Beautifully written poem! Deeply touching, thank you for sharing, dear Sandra! I think you didn't meant to, but my mind is jumping to dementia people as it is a thing that preoccupy my thoughts quite often lately..

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