Melancholy Poem by Moushumi moushumi

Melancholy

Rating: 5.0


Soothed meadows deplane
The body and
Light captures the down memory
In an height-

Every night the bride
Sleeps with the penny man
Soaked, dusted
In the gloomy eyes-

Bunch of ripe trumps
Flashed away gambled
Still the mighty night
Ask the brute penny leave all behind.

Now the ragged penny attained age
The blue days fired the face
With a spindle of past motion
Wait for the turn till dies.

3rd Feb2009

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Catrina Heart 07 February 2009

a poignant composition written in a thought provoking way with fine imagery used...10+++

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Kesav Easwaran 06 February 2009

deep and sad...the images you create are that of a wounded haunted love life...and create, you beautifully...neat composition, Mousumi...10

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Lynda Robson 03 February 2009

Lovely work Mousimi, 10 Lynda xx

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