Metamorphosis Poem by Moushumi moushumi

Metamorphosis

Rating: 5.0


If asked what sort of room
To take refuge;
Of the wild dust onto dorm;
To rely the sloping valleys;
Until sieges
To turn the demeanor,
And the metamorphosis
Occurred by chance:
Consigned & confined in a
Repetitive pale
Despises the fortune
Of the wriggling legs:

26th Dec2008

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr.subhendu Kar 02 January 2009

Of the wild dust onto dorm; To rely the sloping vall...........................wonderfulexpression by the imagery, highly introspective, wellpenned, ! 0+++, thankds fpor sharing

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Reshma Ramesh 31 December 2008

great thoughts well penned in short lines.................well penned

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Moushumi moushumi 29 December 2008

Hello Kesav, I thank you for the supportive comment on this. I think this is the right page to acknowledge.

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Kesav Easwaran 28 December 2008

either by chance or not, it might well prove to be a good metamorphosis...a good introspection, Mousumi...written well...10

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