Memorabilia Poem by Leslie Ching

Memorabilia

Rating: 4.2


In a book of my life
You will see:
Happiness, rejoicing
Pleasure and fun
But hardships too-
Hopelessness, shuns,
A cupful of tears,
A few broken hearts,
Sadness and anger
That's just the start;
What more lies inside
Yet to be revealed
Is just a small envelope
Carefully sealed...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
alex waters 24 February 2009

very curious poem. definately has got methinking. I would say that the book definatley represents your past, and the small carefully sealed envelope represents your future.....but why so small an envelope? it is your future don't you know. i liked this very much, easy to unfold and a hidden meaning, whether it was meant or not. a 10 and a favorite for sure

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Barry A. Lanier 22 February 2009

Now this is writing poetry....detailing the events of the cycle of life and then provoking the reader to comprehend the message at the end.....what is in the envelope? all that is to happen further in the cycle, , , , , a love note....a will...promises from God, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , ?

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Leslie Ching

Leslie Ching

Toronto, ON, Canada
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