Memory And Pain (Haiku) Poem by Udaya R. Tennakoon

Memory And Pain (Haiku)



Winter moon mirror
On snow it moves gently
Foot prints of you

Saturday, May 7, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love,memoir,moon,pain,winter
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Savita Tyagi 10 May 2016

Excellent! Dr. Fab has really inspired us. He is so kind and encouraging with his suggestions. I have been reading every body's haiku on forum. Thanks for sharing.

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Fabrizio Frosini 08 May 2016

would you like to submit it for the book? May I suggest 2 edits? '' Winter moon On the snow it moves gently - Footprints of you ''

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of course, I agree.. thanks dear Fab

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