Message, Bit Too Late........ Poem by Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Message, Bit Too Late........



Mild cool breeze, in the yellow dusk
Sliding down the distant mountain
Kissing beige canopy, lamenting
Lowered on to a parched meadow
In the middle of the valley of life
To whisper a word of hopefulness

Hold your breath.... chums
Clouds are gathering
Far away 'n slowly, though
Hold your breath....little more
They will, sure, be here
One day........soon.....!

Not a sod being alive to listen
Breeze glided away, nonetheless
Surreptitiously and sorrowfully
Casting a thin layer of dust
Ritually, on scalded meadow
To return, carrying a flickering hope

Wednesday, April 10, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: cruelty,defeat,hardships ,hopelessness,life and death
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 01 July 2019

Clouds are gathering! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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H.Chandrasena De Silva 17 April 2019

Not only grass even fish out of water may be feeling like that hoping for a drop of water.Hardship hope and disappointment been projected with a rich vocabulary. A Good poem.

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Thank you Chandre for your comment.

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Suchiththa 10 April 2019

Lovely poem, Thatti

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Walasmulla, Sri Lanka
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