hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 29,595 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Message of peace


What have I to give to world?
As people are selfish and cold
I too was part and one of them
Simple plant had come up from the stem root

But I have breathed differently
It was made known instantly
I could speak on somebody’s behalf
But that could have been little half

There is nothing new
This can be gift to few
Who may excel different way?
They may slowly drift away

They may be considered weak
Not capable or unable to speak
From inner strength, they are powerful
No sorrow but there is happiness in full

I have voice of my own
Music too has to be blown
That may be liked and shared
But it has to be aired

I have one word to be spread
Before I go silent or declared dead
The message must be well read
Taken as piece or slice of bread

It must convert food into blood
Must run in veins as converts from food
It must show the impact of real love
Message of peace for all to believe

Submitted: Sunday, August 25, 2013
Edited: Monday, August 26, 2013

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  • Rookie Nicanor P. Tiosen (8/25/2013 9:39:00 PM)

    With lots of fighting in different parts of the world, any message of peace is truly reassuring. Thanks for this well-crafted piece. By the way, I am sorry it took me more than three years to visit your site. Truth is I have been busy with work and I forgot about PoemHunter and the talented poets in here. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Nicanor P. Tiosen (8/25/2013 9:38:00 PM)

    With lots of fighting in different parts of the world, any message of peace is truly reassuring. Thanks for this well-crafted piece. By the way, I am sorry it took me more than three years to visit your site. Truth is I have been busy with work and I forgot about PoemHunter and the talented poets in here. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 29,595 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/25/2013 12:32:00 AM)

    Nicely done and written

    jeremiah chino9 minutes ago
    I agree whole-heartedly
    Comment +1 (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 29,595 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/25/2013 12:31:00 AM)

    Message of peace, But I have breathed differently, I could speak on somebody’s behalf

    Edward Wahbe7 minutes ago
    I have one word to be spread
    Before I go silent or declared dead
    The message must be well read
    Taken as piece or slice of bread

    It must convert food into blood
    Must run in veins as converts from food
    It must show the impact of real love

    Message of peace for all to believe
    Comment 0
    ok (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 29,595 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/25/2013 12:30:00 AM)

    Cynthia Armstrong11 minutes ago
    ok (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 29,595 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/25/2013 12:16:00 AM)

    What have I to give to world?
    As people are selfish and cold (Report) Reply

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