Mind In Relaxation Poem by Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Mind In Relaxation

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Before the eyes, were
Plane squares, triangles
of tile edges on walls and floor

On them emerging ‘n interpolating
many other patterns, designs,
labyrinths, mosaics, jumbles
of lines, curves, dots et cetera
in parade, sans colors

Appears and disappears!
Appears and disappears!

Mind in reclined mode
enjoyed creating them
until all were lost in air, as
the commode was flushed down

Mind In Relaxation
Thursday, August 4, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: creativity,imaginings ,mood,relaxing
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 18 August 2016

Creativity! With the muse of life. Thanks for sharing.

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Of course. Thank you.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 August 2016

Appearance and disappearance of memories in mind bloom while creativity awakes imagination mood and while tiredness comes we love to relax. This is wonderful Limerick shared with sweetness of expression...10

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Thank you Kumar for your view and sentiments.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 07 August 2016

relaxed mind is the gift to the mankind in this modern era..sometimes the visuals appear during such time is so meaningful.. but sadly certain scenes are forgotten in a second.. whenever I have tried to recollect, I can't...Thank you for sharing one of the best moments of our life

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Many feel quite relaxed in the toilet, and often they use that bit of time for the mind to work on critical issues successfully. Thank you for the comment.

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Kelly Kurt 04 August 2016

My mind often goes to similar places when in that position too. : -)

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This happens to me without any effort at all. Just a moment when many feel free of worries. Thanks Kelley.

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Walasmulla, Sri Lanka
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