Sparkle of your eyes,
diamond of your earings,
landscape of your face,
kills me every night when I think.
shyness of your eyes,
smile on your cheeks,
whisper of your words,
kills me every time when I feel.
I agree with Deepti it reads like it should go on... but this is very cute, shows that you care for this person a lot. lots of emotion in this. good job. Becca
what you think is almost the same as what you feel...good devotional love piece for your miss Love, Amid...10
the softness of your poem the gentleness of your words the warmth with which you write the tone of your words kills me softly when i read hey amit a nice one here +++10 regards anjali
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
hmm..lovely once again... cud have written more to it... :)