Miss You Poem by Ruchita Sharma

Miss You

Rating: 5.0


i open my eyes
but its still there
that dream from my sleep..
turned into a nightmare..
it persists n scares my hollow soul..
makes the breathing lose its rhythmic tone! ! !
i see those images
the collage of my dreams
which haunts me now
right till my heart bleeds

losing the strength
i keep my eyes shut..
punishing my self, of crimes i haven't done
by staying alive
alone! ! !
i seek courage
for the next breath
I shiver
I scream
I realize there is nobody to hear me
in my own mind
I'm trapped forever

i see losing you
and for ever you're gone

i open my eyes
and wish there was nothing to see
because my dream persists and you're no where around me

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amy Marie 10 February 2010

I like how you compare dreams to a collage... and I like the intensity ;)

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Sarwar Chowdhury 06 July 2009

intense love penned beautifully! ! 19+

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