Today I gave you roses
I gave you thirty three,
one red rose for every year
that you shared with me.
as I placed them on your grave
my tears fell silently,
for the man I truly loved
who is now just a memory.
I know that those roses
will slowly wither away,
but a memory so precious
with me will always stay.
It will never ease the sadness
or the pain I've come to know,
for no matter how much time
goes by,
I will always miss you so.
Well expressed thoughts and feelings, very heartfelt with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing. Asal.
Hi Asal, So painful is separation. The pain in the poem touches the hearts of the reader. Great write.
Hi. I just read your poem and it's really nice. May God give comfort to his soul (If the adressee is dead of course) ad patience to thee... Anyway - Nice piece of poetry, I would say You're really talented. Good Luck dear.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
beautiful love poem.the flow, rhyme are perfect and it touches the heart.nice work asal.