Mist Poem by Bill Cantrell

Mist

Rating: 5.0


As my days come to a close
and the gloom comes creeping in
I hear the dust calling out to me,
"It time to shed your skin"
Here we are, just but a mist,
over quickly as a dream
Funny though I can barely see,
the grass has never been so green
All the things I've said and done,
here they are taking off my boots
Now I'm on the underside,
patiently waiting for the roots

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

There are so many beautiful lines in this well thought out write with crystalline images. Loved the opening lines. Very touching. To my Poem List.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 20 April 2022

This is an excellent poem dear friend.. well penned....5 stars

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Trevor Holmes 19 April 2022

An interesting take on death.

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Peter Aldissara 19 April 2022

Shed skin good poem.like long lizard insect

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