Mistake Poem by Alyssa Boccardo

Mistake

Rating: 4.5


One mistake
Can turn your whole life around
Make you smile or make you frown
That one frowning mistake may be
The cause of you loseing me
One mistake
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If only
You could take it all back
Love is something you don't lack
I see you wishing
I see you praying
If only
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Forgiving
I see you down on your knees
You're just trying to please
My forgiveness means a lot to you
Me too
So I forgive you
Forgiving

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sherif Monem 22 September 2008

So nice and telling.

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Greenwolfe 1962 31 May 2008

This is a sweet poem. The kind of poem that some adults just don't get because love has only been misery for them. We must never let love become a lesser feature in our lives. It must always be the first. GW62

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Joseph Poewhit 30 May 2008

GREATEST part of love - FORGIVING, though sometimes it's very hard

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