Mixing Is Bad Poem by Aldo Milian

Mixing Is Bad

Rating: 5.0


Once I heard
mixing makes it better
so I choose you
rain, drip drop
fall on my head
again and again.

Come together
with being bored
and I´m wet
and I´m bored
I don´t like this
At all

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 04 July 2011

Nice poem written with great skill and wisdom. The poem is rich in imagery. Well done. I rate it 10. Please read and rate my poem 'Abortion' on page 4. Warmest regards Akmal

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